Response to Feedback

We have looked at our feedback and addressed what we need to improve and re-do.
We are going to re-film the scene in the "coffee shop" as the tired face look looked too boring and monotonous. We are going to try and use more shot types and enhance the costume. We are going to film more close up performance shots as people think it lacked enough. We are going to try and get Ed (the artist) to show more emotion to keep the viewer interested. We are going to record more to fill the gaps and more to enhance the quality and keep the viewer interested. We may use some effects (possibly filters) in the editing process to make the locations look better as this was brought up in the feedback.