The feedback I wrote down for the track you originally pitched for stated that more thought needed to go into the magazine ad and the digipak, that is still the case to some degree. It is essential that you sketch out your ideas for both products so that the examiner can see a development from your initial ideas.
Your ideas for the new track are stronger and I really like the editing techniques that you are proposing.
You all need to add in the Auteur and Goodwin presentations that you did in the first few weeks, they are on slideshare.net (search under S1-Goodwin and S1-Auteur).
Also some more individual analysis of videos that influence you would enhance your blog further.
Take a look at blog of the week for further inspiration.
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