Feedback to Connor on Evaluation

Your responses are very good, put the question numbers by your responses to make it clear which answer is to which question. Talk about the choices you made about your engagement with the conventions of music videos from your genre of music. Also talk about how you engaged with the form of music videos, obviously it's very different from the narrative video forms you have worked on before. Also talk in detail about specific conventions you used and give examples from your texts. Talk about the video, the magazine ad and the digipak. Discuss the conventions of the ancillary products and which ones you used and/or challenged.
Question 2 talk about the representation of the artist in all three products, do they work in combination to communicate something specific about the artist.
For the question on new media technology talk about some more specific examples of using the internet for looking at examples of other videos from that genre, research into target audience etc.
Also the question about feedback, mention all of the points at which you got feedback, pitch, rough cut, final cut, digipak and magazine ad draft and final versions etc. Also talk about peer feedback and using the class as a sample group of your target audience.
Give specific examples of feedback you received (use quotes or screengrabs if you wish), state what you learnt from the feedback and how you responded to it.
You MUST make these improvements to your evaluation.